Hey Georgie,
You told me a lot in two small paragraphs. You used lots of the same word and it wasn’t very descriptive and you could of made it longer so I found out more about you and the CCL. Other then that I loved it. I found out alot about you and our buddy.
Do you like reading?
You really put good information In 2 paragraphs you could add more but it was still really good and i learnt about your buddy to.
What was favourite book
Hey Georgie,
You told me a lot in two small paragraphs. You used lots of the same word and it wasn’t very descriptive and you could of made it longer so I found out more about you and the CCL. Other then that I loved it. I found out alot about you and our buddy.
Do you like reading?
Hi Georgie
You really put good information In 2 paragraphs you could add more but it was still really good and i learnt about your buddy to.
What was favourite book